If those delivery failures are indeed due to SPF, DKIM, and DMARC not passing verification, then the responsibility should not be on you to notify them. SPF, DKIM, and DMARC are fundamental email authentication standards and should already be well understood across the email industry by IT professionals.
I am an IT administrator for an organization myself, and this has been something I have been aware of for years. We set ours up long ago, and it has also become increasingly clear that more and more email providers have started enforcing these requirements in recent years. It is not really Microsoft's role to individually warn incoming senders about this. Their own email hosting or sending service providers should be advising their customers to configure these properly so their outbound messages are not rejected by other providers. For example, a few months ago I received an email from Salesforce, since we allow Salesforce to send emails on our behalf. Salesforce sent me the "action required" email asking us to set up these records. So, there's no excuses that businesses don't know about this. If a business is still failing to do that at this point, then frankly it reflects a lack of competence on their side.
That said, I still cannot say for certain that the other senders are running into the exact same problem, because I do not see the specific bounce details for their messages. Their failures could be caused by something else entirely. Without that information, I would only be guessing and making assumptions.