I don't see anything wrong with your DNS records, It all lines up, I think the enterprise organization is having a DNS issues looking up your SPF record (temperror).
You can try reducing the lookup and just us this v=spf1 ip4:144.21.34.219 ~all
Instead of v=spf1 include:mail.marcpels.com ~all
which will reduce a lookup.
Anytime you make a change to DNS test it with an eMail Tester, always double check.