Hello Bodie Lindy,
Thank you for contacting Microsoft!!
I tried to replicate the scenario in my test environment, and I was successful in retrieving the lastModifiedDateTime after editing the one note page. Please find the attached screenshot of the same.
Please let us know if the issue is specific to a particular page or for all the pages in the notebook.
Hope this helps.
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