Hi ,
I'm Dyari. Thanks for reaching out. I will be happy to assist you in this regard.
Since the issue happens with two computers and other external devices work fine, probably the issue is from the external drive. If you have another cable, change it. Also try connecting the external drive to another USB port.
In the meantime, I can analyze the minidump file to identify the specific file that's causing the crash.
Please go to C:\Windows\Minidump and copy any minidump files you find to your desktop. Afterward, share these files through OneDrive or Google Drive