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Dear respected Chris Lewis,
Welcome to this Microsoft Community.
Based on the description shared, it seems you are having the sync issues on the shared Notebook which stored in your personal OneDrive and the problem happens only with Surface Windows OS.
If my understanding is correct, I would like to confirm whether you are working on the shared Notebook with the work account as a primary account or you are getting the error when you set the personal account as a primary and working on the shared Notebook.
Moreover, to my knowledge, when you share the Notebook in the personal OneDrive with the other users, the Notebook can be opened in the OneNote for the web using the shared account and the option Open in the desktop app will not be available.
In addition, is your OneNote app up to date? Open your OneNote app> File> Account> Update Options> Update Now.
Appreciate your patience and understanding and thank you for your time and cooperation.
Sincerely,
Mia | Microsoft Moderator